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  1. BlackJackChelaque
    BlackJackChelaque

    You’re stories have always been solid, and your art just keeps getting better, my only question is when can we get more? I understand that life is what happens while you’re making other plans, just if you could let us know when, that’d be great. thanks, and keep up the good work!

    • David
      David

      I do apologize. I just uplouded the new page along with a bit of an explanation why I’ve been out for so long.

  2. Serne
    Serne

    Has RL been kickin ur butt recently?

    • David
      David

      Yeah it totally has. But things have started to clear up and I tihnk I should be able to get the next page done tomorrow. The attached blog will most likely include a large sized apology.

      • Serne
        Serne

        It’s understood that life will occasionally decide to sucker punch you and steal your lunch money like a grade school bully. Besides ur comic is too awesome for me not to check in on at least every other day to drop a vote if n lurk the comments.

        • David
          David

          Well thanks. That means a lot

  3. Rich Durst

    Excellent work on this page. The spooky atmosphere and mood are palpable, and the shift back to primarily greys after so many color-dominated pages coincides nicely with the change in pace now that things are “wrapping up.”

    As a side note, I’m really curious what he found there.

    • David
      David

      Thanks for the comment, Rich.
      Glad you’re diggin’ it.

  4. Serne
    Serne

    You gettin any closer to having a permanent place to stay?

    • David
      David

      yeah we just got approved for this place so hopefully we’ll be able to move in soon.

  5. Blonka
    Blonka

    He smokes? when did this happen? 0.o Isn’t he like, 16?
    Also, I agree with everyone else! Your artistic ability has been improving in leaps and bounds! Love this page!

    • Serne
      Serne

      Cigarettes make you look more badass when you have those expressions on your face.

    • David
      David

      Actually, he’s 18, but he’s smoked since he was 16. He and Evelyn are in their senior year.
      Thanks for reading Blonka!

  6. Marduk
    Marduk

    How in the world do you keep on getting better. You are seriously shredding the charts and graphs in terms of artvancement. I thought your other art was great but this is simply amazing. Freaking Amazing!!!!

    • David
      David

      Aw shucks. Thanks marduk.

  7. DisturbedQueen
    DisturbedQueen

    omg i know you said it was better without color but i adore this page color and all the lighting is amazing XD

    • David
      David

      Well I do my best.
      Thanks so much for reading!

  8. Kajakfaucon
    Kajakfaucon

    This might be your best page yet. Just a fantastic job done. So looking forward to the future of this comic and your art.

    • Serne
      Serne

      There is truthiness in this statement.

    • David
      David

      well I’m looking forward to your continued readership. =]

  9. Gabrie-bob
    Gabrie-bob

    This page is a work of art, that simple and easy, everything you could want from a page, beautiful art, excellent pacing, Intrege, Answers (What will happen to the girls), more beautiful art, and Suspense.

    Keep up the good work i beg of you!

    • David
      David

      Daw I’m blushing.
      Thanks a lot Gabrie-bob.

  10. fairywaif
    fairywaif

    I think this may be my favorite page yet! That cigarette looks fantastic. And I definitely want to know what that blue thing in the fire is!

    • David
      David

      Ahh and I want to tell you what the blue thing is, but, sadly it is a mystery.
      Thanks for reading, Fairy.

  11. Nhobdy
    Nhobdy

    If adding color downgraded this the origional must be damn impressive. Great job! especially that last panel. Part of me wants the next line to be ‘Quick, Evelyn. The game’s afoot!”

    • David
      David

      haha
      Thanks Nhobdy.

  12. Seros Senric
    Seros Senric

    There’s a blue thing!

    Also, being able to suspend people from using magic could be useful in various situations.

    • David
      David

      Useful indeed!

  13. Serne
    Serne

    He looks like a total badass in this one.

    • David
      David

      Heh yeah it’s pretty neat.

  14. Anonymous
    Anonymous

    Oh my, this is probably the first time in ages I’ve commented on anything not on forums… Well, here goes-

    Nice page! The lighting is fantastic. Also Elliot’s expressions are really nice. Especially the last panel. A bit of surprise aswell as Elliot’s badass determination as always. Keep up the fantastic work, it’s really fun to see how your skills develop with each page!

    • David
      David

      Well thanks. That means a lot.

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